Emi: Working with Joaquin and Andrew
Dark comedy short film
Critique of power struggles
Statement about joining religions for power
Completes task for devil, loses humanity at the end
Script is finished
Concerns:
Location filming
Suggestions:
1 death (instead of 3)
Film at markham park
Make your own symbol (instead of the pentagram)
Adriana Vega: Working with David
Comedy short film
Guys teleports by flipping a penny
Everytime he goes somewhere new he tries to do a kind act and it backfires
Interested in using fast cuts
Concerns:
Scheduling
Suggestions:
End with David completing a kind act but when he tries to teleport again he drops the penny down a drain/sewer (for comedic effect)
Aneesa Bajaj: Working with Quinn, Nico, and Zach
Meta dark comedy
Heavy on breaking the fourth wall
Camera starts on initial subject and falls in love with another subject, subject 1 tries to win back its attention
Concerns:
Developing storyline and it making sense
Suggestions:
spotlight turning off on main subject
mic turning off of main subject
-give context to studio setting
-casting call (actor desperate to get role)
Victoria Duque: Working with Kenna and Renn
Coming of age
Message: even through fears and stress, you keep growing
Girls plants seed, life gets stressful, she forgets about it
Friendship breakup (friend gave her the plant)
Suggestions:
End with voice over
Buy 3 different plants to show the growth of the plant
Focus pulls
Use calendar to show days passing
Weeks instead of days
Camera is calendar- writing on camera
Mariana Aldana: Working with Audrey
Drama short film
Starts with a therapy session
Suggestions:
Quick death
Ideally have an adult play therapist
Maybe car crash
Younger
Not dd
Therapy a year later
Put date on bottom
Fabiana Castillo: Working alone
Psychological thriller short film
Guilt is getting to him after killing girl
Protagonist goes crazy
Suggestions:
Give context at the beginning - like crash and show year of crash and then year
Dead person is signified by item specific to them
Time doesn’t pass
Hes like bipolar so he writes the notes himself and just through the movie show the different personalities
Limited dialogue
Daniela Gonzalez: Working with Gaby
Music promo
Annie Lemasters
Dramatic vibe (olivia rodrigo drivers license vibe)
Story based
artist in nashville
Story will be fully acted out
Build up to running on the beach at the end (sitting on beach, walking, then running.)
Suggestions:
Go to the beach during sunrise instead of sunset
Have everything completely planned out before, as there is very limited time to film.
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